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In current days, there are different ways to get anywhere with transports and cars. There is a discussion between people about waste of governments money for two types of roads. Some people think that it would be better to spend more money only for railways than roads, while others disagree with given opinion. Although railways have many advantages, such as saving ecology and less air pollution could benefit more for people than ordinary roads. I agree with group of people who think that government should spend more cash for railways than roads because it would be more convenient and safety for every citizen.
Day after day there are new and different types of transports that ride on the railways. Mostly, railways are convenient for changing location and move around big cities. For instance, it would be the best way for tourists who travel around the world to ride on comfortable wagons and electric trains which ride on the railways. Because it would be much cheaper and faster way for each person who chooses railway transports.
Nowadays, there are a lot of problems with destruction of various roads, especially at the slopes. The reason of this problem is that most car roads usually cannot handle heavy trucks and cars weights, after what getting worse. However, railways generally deal with all such problems and have far fewer problems than roads. Railways can handle a large amount of cargo. This is why most people choose to transport such big amount of coal or heavy metals and other weights without any difficulties.
There are some problems which cannot be ignored. Railways have a lot of benefits but behind it there are also disadvantages, too. For example, railways can to move a large load, but if something breaks down on the railway, then people would have to pay a large amount of money for correction each detail. All in all, such problems occur very rarely and it was one the biggest difficulty of railways.
To conclude, it would be clearly seen that most money should be spend by government mostly for railways. In my personal point of view, it is more convenient way for humanity than roads because railways have more advantages than disadvantages with transportation and i think railways would be more developed in the future.
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| 2019-06-01 | Azizat Gilmeyeva | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
... clearly seen that most money should be spend by government mostly for railways. In m...
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Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n disadvantages with transportation and i think railways would be more developed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96596858639 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4942259463 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7450296443 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.85 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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