Many people hold the opinion that facing with difficult situation is the desirable, for instance, lack of money or psychological issues. Nevertheless, other people believe that the attempts to enhance the condition or solve the problems are more acceptable. This essay will discuss both these opinions and give possible answer for this argument.
On the one hand, all people should be experienced to face with some arduous positions as it is the best way to learn new lessons from life. Sometimes, it is very heavy to remain tolerate when you are in a trouble. That is the beginning of your learning through living. However, it might be somewhat inadequate for someone because of wasting your time with the situation you did not desire. In particular, nowadays, people mind-set is converted to be more practical, so the most of them find it uncomplicated when they are in a bad position. To illustrate, if the bridge connects their home and workplace is damaged, people who have an old mind-set would cross the river by their foot, getting soak, in contrast, modern people would build a bridge and walk through the liver with their own built bridge. It is the simple example for explaining how the people methods to live is differed. They pay their efforts to make improvements, rather than wait and see the situation.
In my viewpoint, the concept to improve the condition and give solution to this would be the best approach. Although we can acquire a numerous knowledge about what life can do to us while accepting the trouble, upstream the hurdles is one of the capacities human should acquire.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, while, for instance, in contrast, in particular, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92250922509 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67549814582 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630996309963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3971656714 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.615384615 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173851525692 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533507728871 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313914276728 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109155479811 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383997538499 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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