Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
We can all agree that even though we are all humans, the same species, deep out inside we're fundamentally different people, thus we make different choices in maybe the same situations in life. Specifically, if someone was put in a bad scenario, they would either accept their fate and wait for it to resolve on its own, or they would do anything to get themselves out of that misery. Everyone has his or her own reasons to justify their decision, though some might not be universally approved, they are worth mentioning about in this essay.
Before diving too deep in to the argument, it is crucial to point out that people have a tendency of being afraid of losing their possessions. This fear sometimes is too much that it prevents them from taking actions, and it is often magnified in bad circumstances.Thus, the first reason to be stated is that a lot of people out there opt to accept their bad fate because they are terrified of risk of losing what they have right now. We all know someone in our life that behave like this when they are put in some kind of an undesirable situation. To name a few, it could be the woman next door, who are heavily abused by her own husband but is too afraid to leave because of fearing being on her own, or it could be a boy who is secretly dreaming of a life in another country but the fear of leaving his family behind is just too much for him to bear.
On the contrary, you might have seen or heard of some people who are just too stubborn to give up to the powerful will of life. Their views of life are totally different from the people mentioned above, to them life does happen to them, it happens for them, and it is up to them to forge it into whatever shape they want. This type of human beings knows what they are heading for, they have a clear vision of what they are getting themselves to, so they are not afraid of the risks they other kind fear. Most of these people would end up getting famous or getting rich or even get into the history books. One of the names that is worth mentioning is Oprah Winfrey, whose name is now written on the list of the most powerful people on Earth, though 50 years ago it was likely that she would be following her grandmother's footstep, which is to become a slave. The fact that she got to become who she is to day is all thanks to her strong will and powerful faith.
It is true that what you have right now is really important and we all should be thankful for them and appreciate them. But that is never a good enough reason for us to let them stand in the way of us and our better futures. In fact, we are the ones who let that reason keep us down, not the reason itself. So personally, I admire the people who just won't let life boss them around, instead they make life work for them. These people are the ones who I would love to become in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... of losing their possessions. This fear sometimes is too much that it prevents them from tak...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...is often magnified in bad circumstances.Thus, the first reason to be stated is that ...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...ave like this when they are put in some kind of an undesirable situation. To name a few, i...
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Line 5, column 945, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...day is all thanks to her strong will and powerful faith. It is true that what y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, thus, in fact, kind of, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 40.0 13.1623246493 304% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 87.0 24.0651302605 362% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 545.0 315.596192385 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23669724771 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24531233668 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453211009174 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 722.7 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5227442248 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.277777778 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2777777778 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815578122097 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315009617983 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251347096229 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533037348018 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142427407545 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.41 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.9 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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