Some people believe it is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents.
Which one do you think is better and why?
Education is, I firmly believe, an inevitable part of life either for modern societies or cultural ones. The question is, however, whether it is superior for students to live away from their parents rather than staying home with their families or not. Acknowledging the advantages of living with parents, as a person experienced both of the situations, I am an advocate of the former perspective.
There are numerous benefits of staying at home. To begin with, from an economic point of view, if you prefer to stay away from home, you either have to rent your own apartment or stay at university dormitory which both cases will be more expensive compared to staying at home with your parents. Moreover, students who are living with their parents have their support which can help them to succeed in university. Also, they don’t have to do their cooking or cleaning so they can save their time to study more.
On the other side, living in a university dormitory has many advantages too. it can help students to improve their marks. For instance, even if you are a lazy student, when you see others put hard work in studying and try to achieve what they want, you get motivated to study too. Beside that students usually study together which help them to find their errors and weaknesses and resolve them. In addition, it will help them to develop their social skills and become familiar with different cultures by communicating with students from other cities. Last but not least, independence of living away from parents is a huge benefit for students as it will help them grow their confidence and enabling them to live a successful life after on.
All things considered, despite undeniable benefits of living with, I wholeheartedly believe, due to advantages such as positive effects on confidence, grades, and independence of students, it is better to live away from home.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It
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Suggestion: help them find
...t students usually study together which help them to find their errors and weaknesses and resolve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94339622642 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66184891725 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7826681168 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409744446041 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13719525523 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774907058374 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246508008148 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425792446006 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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