Some people believe that it is better for students at university to live far away from home than to live at home with their parents. Which one do you think better and why?
Education has always been a contributory factor in improving the quality of life and it can positively affect many aspects of our lives. some individuals opine that the benefits accruing from living far from home to students are significant. I completely agree with this notion as it can raise the student’s confidence and make them more responsible and independent.
To begin with, there is a direct and positive relationship between studying far away from home and increasing the students’ self-esteem. The longer distance between the students and their parents, the more confidence they would have in their real life, as when students are far from their homes a great number of facilities would not be provided for them and their needs should be met by themselves, which in turn force them to deal with financial, emotional and social problems, thereby making them more confident. According to some latest research carried out recently by Michigan University, the students living far from their parents are able to achieve even better results in exams than those who are living with their families. Therefore, being far away from home not only can bring about more confidence but also can positively affect the academic skills of the students.
Yet another substantially positive consequence attributed to living far from home is to make the students more responsible and independent alike. that is, living in this condition can impose significant financial burden on the students and they are expected to manage and address it, so most of the students choosing to live and study far from their parents are forced to find an occupation in order to make money and obviate the needs, which in turn significantly makes them more responsible and increases their autonomy. Take a student living far from his or her parents as an example; perhaps when he or she arrives home, being responsible for doing his or her homework, making food, and cleaning the house, so he or she has to arrange his or her time to do all these duties because no one else accepts this responsibility, thus living far away from home is bound to remarkably increase a sense of responsibility amongst the students and make them more independent in terms of meeting their needs.
In conclusion, considering the rational points discussed above, although living or studying far from home seems to be tough at the first sight, it can bring about some considerable advantages for the students who experience it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 410.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09024390244 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8273384924 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526829268293 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.191808904 49.4020404114 245% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.727272727 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2727272727 20.7667163134 179% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385576115546 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162951983779 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818240145354 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237911148744 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590862209325 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.0946893788 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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