Some people believe that it is a good idea to fall in love in college while other think differently. Personally, i completely agree with falling in love while in college.
The first reason for why one should fall in love while in college is that love help people grow more mature mentally, complete them as a person. Being in a relationship make a person to be more responsible that's mean not to blame other people when something bad happens. Also YOU have to be able to show empathy, put YOURSELF in YOUR partner's shoes in order to understand the emotion and support them in their time of needing. YOU will have to be able to own to YOUR mistakes, apologize to YOUR partner when YOU are wrong. All of this characteristics makes YOU grow more mature mentally.
The second reason is love relationship could help YOU go through difficult time. College is considered a transition between a teenager and an adult, so it is not surprised that a lot of people having a hard time dealing with changes. While being in a relationship, YOU will have someone to provide help or support YOU in difficult situation, encourage YOU to pursue YOUR goal, or nudge YOU in the right path when YOU lost. It is essential that people have someone to support them their life.
More than that, YOUR partner could help YOU to discover more experience, widen YOUR horizon. For example, they could introduce YOU to something that YOU haven't done before or too afraid to try, and thanks to them YOU may discover a new hobby or enjoyment.
In conclusion, people should falling in love in college is a great idea because it helped them to grow as a person, have someone to support them in the time of need and broaden their horizon.
Some people believe that it is a good idea to fall in love in college while other think differently. Personally, i completely agree with falling in love while in college.
The first reason for why one should fall in love while in college is that love help people grow more mature mentally, complete them as a person. Being in a relationship make a person to be more responsible that's mean not to blame other people when something bad happens. Also YOU have to be able to show empathy, put YOURSELF in YOUR partner's shoes in order to understand the emotion and support them in their time of needing. YOU will have to be able to own to YOUR mistakes, apologize to YOUR partner when YOU are wrong. All of this characteristics makes YOU grow more mature mentally.
The second reason is love relationship could help YOU go through difficult time. College is considered a transition between a teenager and an adult, so it is not surprised that a lot of people having a hard time dealing with changes. While being in a relationship, YOU will have someone to provide help or support YOU in difficult situation, encourage YOU to pursue YOUR goal, or nudge YOU in the right path when YOU lost. It is essential that people have someone to support them their life.
More than that, YOUR partner could help YOU to discover more experience, widen YOUR horizon. For example, they could introduce YOU to something that YOU haven't done before or too afraid to try, and thanks to them YOU may discover a new hobby or enjoyment.
In conclusion, people should falling in love in college is a great idea because it helped them to grow as a person, have someone to support them in the time of need and broaden their horizon.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62950819672 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55223105629 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481967213115 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.199879535 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330358076548 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164340478746 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.221988831663 0.0667982634062 332% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267124044377 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24118320368 0.056905535591 424% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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