Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
According some people free information sharing is good for society, however others say that some information is so important to share.Due to technological developments it is important now to share knowledge and information with others as it makes people aware of improvement. However, there are types of information which are considered to be personal and can not spreaded.
Today every single day appear new technologies. It means that it is so important to share with this information because it helps us to be aware of events happening around us. Besides this researches can be use for invent new technologies which can be used for developing living standards and show a great improvement. For example research around medicine. We can get any organism by bottomman cages. This discovery allows us get away from donor's organs. Sharing with this kind of information can be useful for students it allows them to be more professional.
On the other side sharing with a lot of information can be dangerous. For example researches which are connected with nuclear weapon are very confidential and secret. If this kind of information find wrong hands it can cause terroristic threat and war. Actually, secrets of any company which are connected with financial services also confidential. Distribution of this information can cause problems with finance because this information are really important to be better than competitor. Also it can cause loss of competitive ability.
In conclusion I prefer stay neutral. It is important to share information with others for developing our world, however information which consider as secrets of state should stay confidential.
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- The bar graph gives information about the number of library books borrowed from Lammertown Public Library in 1991 and 2001 and the pie chart gives information about the library's membership in 2010. 67
- Many of world's cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage. What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest? 61
- Some people believe that it is a good idea to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...me information is so important to share.Due to technological developments it is imp...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... of events happening around us. Besides this researches can be use for invent new te...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...important to be better than competitor. Also it can cause loss of competitive abilit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3446969697 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08181361923 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.4196132397 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265009925452 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871129231783 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102936575463 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204248721487 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104330432472 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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