Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part time to ensure better opportunities in future.
Others are of the opinion, having a job while in university distracts the individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent years working and studying simultaneously has become an important and widely debated issue. While some people maintain that a part time job is highly beneficial for a student’s future, others reject this notion, believing that working is detrimental to a person’s studies. Personally, I believe the drawbacks outweigh the advantages.
For a variety of reasons it can be worthwhile for students to get a job while they study. First of all, a student can gain vital knowledge in their given field. For example, if a person is studying to be a teacher, then working as a tutor in their free time will allow them to acquire experience before they begin their teaching career. Another advantage is the financial aspect. Many people rely on loans from their family or banks to partake in university. By having a part-time job students can earn money as they learn, which means they may not have the financial burden of paying back loans after they finish studying.
On the other hand, there are many negative aspects of working and studying at the same time. The biggest disadvantage is that work can be time-consuming. Students, especially those in university, have a heavy workload while studying due to numerous assignments and many tests throughout the course. If a student is overworked it could distract from their studies and cause them to lose focus, resulting in bad grades, which would affect their future careers. Moreover, students may have higher levels of stress due to their hectic schedules. This could result in a student feeling dejected with their career choice and they may even drop out of university.
Taking everything into account, although there are strong arguments to support the claim that working part time is advantageous, I am inclined to believe that it is better for students to focus on their studies because high grades often help them secure a better career in the future.
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- Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part time to ensure better opportunities in future Others are of the opinion having a job while in university distracts the individual Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ssue. While some people maintain that a part time job is highly beneficial for a student’...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ments to support the claim that working part time is advantageous, I am inclined to belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03761755486 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68515015371 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58934169279 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8038598693 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4375 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23710399306 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775499989235 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669131681219 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1606066918 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423697010338 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.