People have different views as to wheather it is important to disclose information regarding scientific research,business and academic world or certain information are valuable and meant to keep confidential.Though sharing information is essential but certain informations are not meant to share for own as well as country’s benefit.
Admittedly, exchanging knowledge between the various faculties help to work towards the betterment of the country as it allow us to listen others perspective which could be more powerful that’s why thesedays so many seminar, debate and panel discussion are conducting including representatives from different areas so as to bring the best possible outcomes and also research are based on the records or data that are available.
However, there are sudden information which shouldn’t be disclosed such as manufacturing business. The information regarding the quality, function and design of new product is valuable as assets as it could make a great hit in the market and gain maximum profit.If any of this information was leaked, competitors could easily copy the distinctive features of the product and produce in the market before the actual manufacturer.Moreover, some technological skills like making nuclear bomb are too dangerous and the technique should remain sealed within the particular producer to maintain the peace in the world.
In conclusion, I believe in both the statement.It depends on the content of the information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64732142857 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51320565847 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660714285714 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 171.105815214 49.4020404114 346% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 253.0 106.682146367 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.8 20.7667163134 216% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2 7.06120827912 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317020283659 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132258729631 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919619791127 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151112986205 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970695145264 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.0946893788 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.38 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.82 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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