Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give tour own opinion.
Nowadays, sharing information is believed to be useful and necessary in different fields. that is the reason why many people tend to encourage everyone to exchange as many details as they know. however, others who do not completely agree with that idea.
On the one hand, some people believe that sharing information benefits a lot in improving knowledge as well as skills to dealing with particular task. For instance, in scientific research, team members have to share their ideas with each other so that they can get better result in the experiment. Apart from that, revealed the ideas at corporate and educational level is also crucial in some cases. Another example depicts that in some schools, students are encouraged to discuss with other to find out the answer of question. that will help them understand and remember all the theories faster. Thus, it is necessary in some cases to share ideas or data to other for a better result.
On the other hand, there are many situation where one has to conceal the data as it is most important and invaluable information. such as the experience that they have to encounter with a lot of difficulties to find out the detail which is related to the national secret all of then are so valuable and never shared easily. Moreover, in corporate or business level, employee have to keep secret about their ideas as it helps to get promotion in their field. however, some paid information can not be revealed easily.
In conclusion, in my opinion, sharing valuable information is necessary in some cases, although some idea such as secret related to nation could not be share easily in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sult in the experiment. Apart from that, revealed the ideas at corporate and educ...
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...s or data to other for a better result. On the other hand, there are many situat...
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...esult. On the other hand, there are many situation where one has to conceal the data as it...
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... helps to get promotion in their field. however, some paid information can not be revea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, apart from, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91039426523 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60841293497 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537634408602 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4954645987 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8571428571 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9285714286 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289183512451 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101364196121 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081463648374 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188463940356 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490353688898 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.