Sharing information with or without any charges is now controversial. While there is an opinion that spreading valuable information freely is beneficial to individuals and society, I agree with those who argue that it is necessary to publish some vital and priceless knowledge with an amount of fee.
On one hand, people support the idea of free sharing of science, business and academic works-related for several reasons. From a personal perspective, free access to this information may facilitate people’s work and study more effectively. For instance, if successful entrepreneurs share experience about how they set up and run their business, many others can learn from it, and start and operate their own business in the right way. Additionally, no matter how important information is, it will have no value if it cannot be approached and implemented in the real world. Hence, hiding such knowledge is like making more barriers to discourage the potential of progress.
On the other hand, I believe that it is better to require payment when expressing some kind of crucial and sensitive information. One of the main reasons for this is that plenty of priceless knowledge has been created thanks to the endless effort of not only a person but also even a team. It is unfair for them if they are not paid for their work. This reward can be considered as a gratitude for their contribution as well as help to reduce their financial burden when they do further research in the future. In addition, receiving essential information without any financial difficulties, some people might not appreciate the value of knowledge. Specifically, they can neglect the core process of acquiring knowledge or not try to apply what they learn in the best way.
In conclusion, it seems to me that although some positive impacts may be triggered by spreading information with no charge, I am in favor of the view that distributing vital knowledge should be spent money in some particular cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07012195122 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9480414631 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7689047253 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226529298266 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713845548874 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535500680298 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132245038797 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229256736278 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.