TPO 47
Events for all situation about folklore and animals all subject is one of the hectic phenomena in every modern society. Affecting people in all walks of life considerably. The question is that however, whether agree or this agree has sparked a spirited debate among people recently. I am, to a huge extent agree in favor of the former standpoint. in the ensuring paragraph i will try to shed some lights on my perspective through some ample examples and xonspicous reasons.
on the one hand, it is crystal clear that if i know about event you may be helper to people so this situation have positive effect of you for example one city in my country had earth quick and it was very disappointment and I was very sad so I and some friends bought many foods and helper's thing for people and we went to this city and we tried to help them after this happening we were very happy if we did not see this event in the TV maybe some people have damage effect and these people remained hungry and thirsty.
on the other hand, there is no doubt that if i read news paper about scientific an other subject i can improve my knowledge for example in the today news i read about frags scientific found one reason for disease from slope's frogs and it is very helpful fro all the people's world while i read this information so i enjoyed because my friend has this disease and i will call to him and i say about this happen.
finally, nobody can deny that if i search new event happening around the word this knowledge may be have positive effect in my situation in works an d society. for instance my father have company about cloths, in the TV have program news about industries about modern cloths my father try to learn every thing about new cloths and modern cloths. these news helped my father every day and every year.can these news help my father?
to make long story short, from all the above mentioned reasons and points, one can safely draw a conclusion that if one weight merits and demerits of above statement, we can soon realize that it is important to know about events happening around the world.
- tpo 47 86
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for examples working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- TPO 42 80
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. [ATTENTION: This answer got a 4.0 in IELTS.]To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 41
- TPO 15 80
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5091383812 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31309195056 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483028720627 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.902266781 48.9658058833 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.0 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8181818182 20.6045352989 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 11.7677419355 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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