Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
It has been argued that information in some areas is sharable as much as it can be, whereas some information is considered to be too significant or confidential to be freely used. This essay will discuss this issue with both sides of views including why it can be free to be shared or why not.
Information only exists when it can be used and seen by people. Otherwise, It no longer has a power to inform something to anyone. We must be able to utilize it to improve ourselves in the field of education or social relationship. For instance, If it had not been for the test tips that I earned by the internet, I could not have applied for the exam and even written this essay. Since I could get the related information with the easiest way we all now have, I can make myself being here.
On the other hand, there is a kind of information which is too dangerous or fatal to be shared with no control. It must be managed by designated people, not anyone. In my opinion. most of this information consists of something confidential in terms of national security, which means a lot to normal men and women. We can easily notice a catastrophe if this information is unveiled just by watching soap operas or movies. It does not give you a burden to imagine how hard we would be if this matter happening in our daily lives.
In conclusion, some information can be shared and other must stay dim under the terms of being deadly to this globe. I strongly agree that some information has to be in control as I do not want my life to be unstable because of unnecessarily released information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...ated people, not anyone. In my opinion. most of this information consists of somethi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46048109966 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71108975799 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3466093853 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26278707334 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940399336039 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901315848939 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18672632184 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673541666967 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.