Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this Era, the foundation of any clever country it its economic growth. some populace ponder that, it is viable for nation ergonomically and have peaceful environment. However, others say that, these two aims are not compatible. I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
On one hand, economical and environment are two major aspects that, determine a successful countries. There are many nations growing in terms of their economic, while having a pollution free surrounding. Clean environment has the improved economy of nation and some advanced technology helping for economical growth such solar equipment .which are worked by solar system. These are gadgets helping to improve economy and having a pollution free nation. For an example, India, where authority has taken a crucial decisions for not only inclining economy of nation but also decreasing air pollution such as green economy through Clean Energy, this project create more and better jobs because of that, government has become economically successful.
On the other hand , others say that, these two aims are not compatible because in some countries people are not educated, they do not know what are the disadvantage of cutting down trees and much using of auto mobiles, which are harmful for nature. Additionally, economical successfully Nation develops more Industries that, generate increases amount of waste. For an example ,Bangladesh ,weather government has more focused upon improving transport and much using of fossil fuels due to that air pollution has been ballooned.
In my opinion, government ought to give equal chance men as well as women , thus, gender gap it is effect on Economy of country.
To conclude, on certain area where, ergonomically growth and clean environment possible for countries, while, these are two sources not not playing compatible for nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39726027397 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78703257204 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609589041096 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7237890666 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.117602777752 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731942710725 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18793765477 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840147854566 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.