Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent times, curbing environmental problems along with an stable and lucrative economy have become a goal of many nations. Whether both the targets can be achieved simultaneously or not is open for dispute among groups of individuals contradicting opinions. In this essay, I shall discuss both point of views followed by my own perspective.
To begin with, it is acknowledged by most that industrialization and tourism are the two major sectors that contribute to the economy of most of the countries. However, both areas are also responsible for causing environmental issues. Take manufacturing industries and factories, for example, the process of producing goods, which are exported internationally and earn astronomical revenue for the country, causes air as well as water pollution. Another example is that topmost tourist preferred cities in India are the ones with maximum environmental problems. Therefore, it is credible that maintaining a successful economy as well as a clean environment is plausible.
On the other hand, if the governments devise strategic approach while keeping in mind the protection and preservation of healthy surroundings and then enact strict laws, both economy and environment can be ameliorated. Moreover, a minor proportion of the national budget could be spent on maintaining hygiene at the places which are potentially more prone to pollution. To exemplify, countries like England and the USA are developed and rich along with a safe and tidy environment because they follow proper guidelines to avoid as much pollution as possible.
To conclude, in my opinion, although it is difficult to have to gain both achievements, it is not impossible. In other words, a collaboration of both citizens and the government can assist to attain clean surrounding and better economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44522968198 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27970401713 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625441696113 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3882977161 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206676901088 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654940359856 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370544339705 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116098044497 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180805092558 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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