A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject. Do you agree or disagree.
In this era, the foundation of any sagacious country is its education system. According to universities should allow to equal number of boy and girl undergraduates in every subjects . I fully concur with the statement.
On one hand, education is the key to unlock the golden door to freedom. University ought to accept the same number of students from the both gender in equal opportunity into every subjects and levels . There are a multitude of benefits to offer in every subjects : it will show the equality; ideas - high chances of having dissimilar ideas ,while studying; not only education sector but also into other sectors to give equal opportunities for both gender and throughout the history male and female will work together to build a great world. for an example ,Canada government has given jobs, scholarship, loans and and give equal opportunity for both gender due to that, in the world, proportion of educating male and female are similar, also there ,unemployment is decreasing.
Other hand, nowadays, majority of women are not educating because of having a some family issues. If academies should give more chance to women rather than male , said by women - give me an educated mothers I will give you educated Nation because they are spending much time and with their children vis - a' - vis to fathers. Moreover they can help their child in study by means of their education. The epitome of this is India, where in the past percentage of educated women was lower owing to that , government has given large amount of opportunity women in education fields ,business areas and sports industries to mitigate the issue of an education.
To conclude , Universities and authorities should allow equal same number of both gender because both are quintessential for developing nation and build a great world ,but selecting subjects in universities , it is interesting upon both gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80120688768 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8840892922 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215266162153 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791771444373 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984608414387 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135598016541 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062153314271 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.