A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject Do you agree or disagree

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...untry is its education system. According to universities should allow to equal ...
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... allow to equal number of boy and girl undergraduates in every subjects . I ful...
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...d girl undergraduates in every subjects . I fully concur with the statement. O...
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...golden door to freedom. University ought to accept the same number of students fr...
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... number of students from the both gender in equal opportunity into every subjec...
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...om the both gender in equal opportunity into every subjects and levels . There ...
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...gender in equal opportunity into every subjects and levels . There are a multit...
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...rtunity into every subjects and levels . There are a multitude of benefits to of...
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...o offer in every subjects : it will show the equality; ideas - high chances of ha...
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... high chances of having dissimilar ideas ,while studying; not only education secto...
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...ying; not only education sector but also into other sectors to give equal opport...
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...t also into other sectors to give equal opportunities for both gender and throu...
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...her sectors to give equal opportunities for both gender and throughout the histo...
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...d throughout the history male and female will work together to build a great wor...
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... and female will work together to build a great world. for an example ,Canada go...
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... work together to build a great world. for an example ,Canada government has given...
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... to build a great world. for an example ,Canada government has given jobs, schola...
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...ment has given jobs, scholarship, loans and and give equal opportunity for both gender ...
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...t, in the world, proportion of educating male and female are similar, also there ...
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... male and female are similar, also there ,unemployment is decreasing. Other ha...
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...le are similar, also there ,unemployment is decreasing. Other hand, nowadays, ...
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... is decreasing. Other hand, nowadays, majority of women are not educating beca...
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...ve more chance to women rather than male , said by women - give me an educated mot...
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...e , said by women - give me an educated mothers I will give you educated Nation becaus...
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...ducated mothers I will give you educated Nation because they are spending much ti...
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...tion because they are spending much time and with their children vis - a - vis t...
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...heir children vis - a - vis to fathers. Moreover they can help their child in study b...
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...f educated women was lower owing to that , government has given large amount of op...
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...of opportunity women in education fields ,business areas and sports industries to ...
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...he issue of an education. To conclude , Universities and authorities should all...
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...ities and authorities should allow equal same number of both gender because both ...
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...h gender because both are quintessential for developing nation and build a grea...
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...ential for developing nation and build a great world ,but selecting subjects in...
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... ,but selecting subjects in universities , it is interesting upon both gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13870967742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80120688768 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.8840892922 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215266162153 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791771444373 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984608414387 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135598016541 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062153314271 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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