It is often argued that working for three to four days every week benefits the employees more than spending five to six days at a job. In my opinion, I believe that working lesser days per week can lead to better work-life balance along with increasing the industries' productivity and creating more job opportunities.
In this highly competitive world, there is a lot of job-related stress, which may be detrimental to physical and mental health. It may even spill out to affect the performance at work as well as a relationship with family and friends. A growing body of research has suggested that job-related stress was the most important reason for taking maximum workdays off. Working lesser days may have few benefits. Firstly, it would give time for a person to recover from the job-related stress and he would start fresh on the first day of the week again. For instance, One of my cousins working at a global company spends four days a week at his office while the rest of the days are devoted to his family and friends, as well as playing soccer.
Additionally, working a lesser number of days would result in more employment opportunities for other equally qualified people. This would lead to less unemployment burden on the society and nation as a
whole.
- The amount of sport shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sports events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer a 61
- Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (Sample Answer 2) 73
- Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days Why is this Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences 72
- When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...-life balance along with increasing the industries productivity and creating more job oppo...
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Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst day of the week again. For instance, One of my cousins working at a global co...
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Line 3, column 740, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and friends, as well as playing soccer. Additionally, working a lesser number of...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt burden on the society and nation as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82648401826 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72773632215 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607305936073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0414424698 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.7 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24436995038 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096687551093 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657377315941 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168262411311 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499502304209 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.