Some people believe the money is more important than free time for a good quality of life. Other say the opposite is true. Discuss both view what is more important in your opinion. Give relevant examples.
Nowadays, It is an undeniable fact that more money is vital part of life. Consider the question of some people believe that money is more important rather than free time to living good quality of life and other people opposite to this statement and there are conveying arguments on both side of the topic.
One point of view in favor of is that generally money is vital part of life. This may be due to the fact that money improve standard living, gives popularities in society this all think go with money gives good quality of life. Some experts also support the view that money gives to fulfills basic necessaries such as food, house and cloths and this three needs are basic of life, for this three needs earn more money for living good quality of life. For example, many studies have consistently found that some developing counties spend more time on work for gain more money. However , other developed countries spend working hours of work and they earn sufficient money for good quality of time. Based on the above facts, it is reasonably true, to suggest that sufficient money gives affecting living quality of life.
On other hand , opponents of the idea claim that free time also required in life .this may be due to the fact that quality time in life spending good time with near and dear person of life. IT is important in life spending a time with near and dear person we can share emotions and share problem and idea. In second think of free time we utilized this time for various hobbies circular activities and mediation. IT also focus on health so that free time also needs to living quality of life.
On balance, I think both two think such as earn more money as well as free time are stable needs for good quality of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'fulfill'.
Suggestion: fulfill
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: .
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Message: Did you mean 'focuses', 'focusses'?
Suggestion: focuses; focusses
...cular activities and mediation. IT also focus on health so that free time also needs ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... stable needs for good quality of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, i think, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5910543131 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1533078493 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437699680511 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8749916581 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.538461538 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.438257624595 0.244688304435 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175180829966 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917645599792 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302074697241 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891846256442 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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