Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Choices are a fundamental right of every people. Several people believe, in this era, that everyone has plenty of choices. I do personally agree that today every person has much more choices compared to the past. In this essay, I will explain more deeply about this issues and deliver my opinion for latter view.
There are several proofs which show how much people, nowadays, have a number of options for their life. Firstly, everyone be able to choice what the job that they will pick up in the future. In the past, this is impossible thing for them to pursue their dreams due to the bad education system and strict regulation that holding up their freedom. Take Indonesia as an example, many people, in world-war II era, cannot be someone that they always want to be because the rules banned their right. Hence, nowadays people are lucky enough to have a lot choices.
Secondly, in this technology development era, people freely can choice their dream destinations for spending their leisure time because of easy access to get transportations. In comparing with several decades ago, hardly to people visit other countries or contingents in order to lack of vehicles that exist at that time yet today everything possible for them. People can utilize a lot of transportations mode. In contrary, currently, several countries are implementing new regulation to restrict people for doing speech in public area besides the freedom to speak in public place were free before. Yet, this condition is not covering the possibility for people in choosing something.
To sum up, there are several opportunity for people to choice in their life, such as choosing their profession and their transportation, while it almost impossible happen in the past. On the other hand there is insignificant factor such as the restriction for speak in public area which is applied in several states.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun opportunity seems to be countable; consider using: 'several opportunities'.
Suggestion: several opportunities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04487179487 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67226975454 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573717948718 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2454661082 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16817503248 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622970175354 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346625539546 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104004883579 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423917446447 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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