In many countries the cost of living are rising. What are the effects of this on individuals and society? Suggest solutions to this problem.
The increment of living cost happens in several states. In my opinion, the situation that plausible to happen later is the increasing level of poverty. However, the reduction price of food material is a satisfactory solution.
There are several reasons why the rising of living cost has directly proportional to the increasing number of destitution, while in the long run it can lead to the unprecedented chaos in society. First and foremost, the price increases of human basic necessities are able to hinder people for doing their activity. Meanwhile, the individuals not only being difficult to purchase a decent food to maintain their energy but also escalating the percentage of roofless people due to the expensive price for renting a house. For example, several decades ago America faced the severe crisis that led to the poverty numbers, the citizens in order to fulfill their necessity was forced to loots several shopping center. However, bringing down a price in specific sector can be effective to tackle this problem.
Furthermore, reducing the price of several important material such as food is considered as the successful solution for lowering the average spending of cost living; consequently, in the long run the economic issue will be stable. This is because, the living expenditures contain several sectors including accommodation and food. Meanwhile, people need to eat three times in a day to meet they nutrition in which it cannot be replaced by other activity that makes this sector crucial compared to have a house while some people can live together by the method of share apartment or living with their relatives. For example, in India, due to the great expense of cost of living, the government decides for lowering the price in the several ingredients such as rise and cooking oil and in several years later India can stabilize their economic problem. Therefore, lowering price is an elucidation.
In conclusion, poverty is the worst impact that will happen if the rising of living cost happens, however, to eradicate that condition, lowering the ingredients of food must be taken by the government. Where possible, government can create some schemes about giving subsidy in accommodation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... foremost, the price increases of human basic necessities are able to hinder people for doing the...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun shopping seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some shopping'.
Suggestion: some shopping
...ill their necessity was forced to loots several shopping center. However, bringing down a price ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22905027933 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81907102596 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1614348927 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.8 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161854157581 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570543692293 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564676210442 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950059532695 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034211478759 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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