Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is obvious that people have more choices both in their careers and daily lives due to the improvement of productivity and technology. I agree that people have many opportunities to decide their jobs and lifestyles, but too many choices may make them confused.
First of all, people are given more chances to choose different types of work and workplaces thanks to new technology. On the one hand, new jobs have been generated in the job market, like computer programmers, travel guides and so on. On the other hand, it is easy for employees to change their workplaces or even the form of work. For instance, someone can work abroad by using a telephone meeting, or a reputable scholar that can impart students from around the world online, which is unimaginable before this digital era.
Secondly, there are more colorful lifestyles chosen by citizens. Obviously, the way of spending spare time had not changed significantly, but the development of the entertainment industry gives viewers a huge number of selections, like reality TV shows, Vlog and so on. Otherwise, our daily lives also are full of many selective products. For instance, ordinary families even can easily sample exotic food, which was expensive for them.
However, this trend of having so many choices in our lives also caused some problems. The increased number of choices may make people confused because of the fewer differences between choices. People spend more time comparing different items rather than enjoying them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15102040816 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70784874294 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628571428571 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5692193817 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0769230769 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8461538462 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13905821328 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496335295441 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584353845862 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934223535041 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666985780023 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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