Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
To what extent do you agree of disagree with this statement ?
There are many choices for people to select in nowadays. Some people agreed with this behavior, however negative effects should also be considered. In this essay, both ideas will be examined.
First of all, people having too many choices has several benefits. Firstly, it can make them feel excited everyday since in each day, they don’t have to repeat their routines in the same choices. For instance, in Thailand, there are various international restaurants around office building in order for employees to choose for lunch. As a result, they will not feel bored of the same dishes. Another example is people can select transportation to get to work place because right now, in Thailand, they are different kinds of public transportation which can reach to work place in alternative ways. So, it will be great to have a change of environments during comes to work. In addition, numerous choices in nowadays make people feel convenience. One clear example is people who lived near many type of supermarkets are easier to find things for living than people who lived near just one supermarket. This because each brand of supermarket sold different segment of products.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks for people to have too much choices. To begin with, it can make people waste of time. This resulted from when people have to think too much and hesitate before selecting somethings that have a huge number of choices. For example, when office workers have to spend time decide for restaurant during lunch break, it might take more then half of hour which mean they will not have enough time to eat. Therefore, they will go up to work late. Furthermore, it might lead to business competition since it has to meet people’s demand. To give an example, there are a lot of delivery application for people to ordering food. This because people need many choices to choose their food in this service. As a consequent, every delivery brands have to improve its function all the time in order to win the market.
In conclusion, even though having numerous choices for people to choose in nowadays has some disadvantages, I believe that people have to live in the society with non-repetitive of choices in everyday to make them feel entertained and cheerful. If there are just a few choices in living, people will get bored of their lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...e are many choices for people to select in nowadays. Some people agreed with this behavior,...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... Firstly, it can make them feel excited everyday since in each day, they don't have...
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Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... lunch. As a result, they will not feel bored of the same dishes. Another example is peo...
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Line 3, column 710, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
... to work. In addition, numerous choices in nowadays make people feel convenience. One clear...
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Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun type seems to be countable; consider using: 'many types'.
Suggestion: many types
... clear example is people who lived near many type of supermarkets are easier to find thin...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e some drawbacks for people to have too much choices. To begin with, it can make peo...
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Line 5, column 375, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... during lunch break, it might take more then half of hour which mean they will not h...
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Line 5, column 597, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eople's demand. To give an example, there are a lot of delivery application ...
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Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...g numerous choices for people to choose in nowadays has some disadvantages, I believe that ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ciety with non-repetitive of choices in everyday to make them feel entertained and cheer...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... few choices in living, people will get bored of their lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93984962406 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6490599718 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508771929825 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1875706762 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6956521739 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26086956522 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250362080193 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820653112811 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704877226071 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177788048848 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338507814004 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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