Some people believe that people should be required to retire from their careers at certain age. Others believe that people should be allowed to work as long as they like.
Discuss both these views, and give your opinion.
Some people assure there should be a mandatory retirement age, while others think that there should be no limits to how long a person is allowed to work. I personally agree with the first point opinion.
On the one hand, a group of people have opinion that someone should works until 55 or 60 years old depend on their work. The reason perhaps because a certain people with a fairly old age may lose their ability, physical ability, intellectual they had when they were young. It must make their productivity and performance decrease. Another reason is people feel the number of unemployment will go up dramatically because number of student graduation are not balance with number of retirement.
On the other hand, people believe that someone intellectual and performance can’t be determined by age. We can’t equalized each person with same measurement. People should working as long as they want and they can. Other people thought that working is some people hobby, they love it and gives some meaning/ reason to life well. Perhaps, some people are the only one breadwinner so, they need work longer than others. Furthermore, they have more experience than younger people.
There are some good reason to working without any age standard. But, I am highly agree that we must have a mandatory pension age standard. Although, they still have ability and good performance, they need to relief stress, using their money to enjoy the world, vacuum from their career and doing their hobby. They can earn money and spent time with their hobby or other. Moreover people should give chance to the young generation.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Some people assure there should be a man...
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...ly agree with the first point opinion. On the one hand, a group of people have ...
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...not balance with number of retirement. On the other hand, people believe that s...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'equalize'
Suggestion: equalize
...ce can’t be determined by age. We can’t equalized each person with same measurement. Peop...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e more experience than younger people. There are some good reason to working wi...
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Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...hout any age standard. But, I am highly agree that we must have a mandatory pension a...
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Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d spent time with their hobby or other. Moreover people should give chance to the young ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98518518519 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4671671164 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.481475417 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1764705882 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451668315827 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142969295884 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116087631498 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287658141409 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778455441588 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Some people assure there should be a man...
^^^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly agree with the first point opinion. On the one hand, a group of people have ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not balance with number of retirement. On the other hand, people believe that s...
^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[4]
Message: The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: 'equalize'
Suggestion: equalize
...ce can’t be determined by age. We can’t equalized each person with same measurement. Peop...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e more experience than younger people. There are some good reason to working wi...
^^^^
Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...hout any age standard. But, I am highly agree that we must have a mandatory pension a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 375, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d spent time with their hobby or other. Moreover people should give chance to the young ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98518518519 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4671671164 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.481475417 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1764705882 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451668315827 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142969295884 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116087631498 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287658141409 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778455441588 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.