There is an assumption that the original of the country defines a person's culture, although others think that the influence of birthplace is minor for determining their lifestyle. In this essay, I give my opinion with my viewpoint about these two ideas
First and foremost, I believe that the definition of a person's way of life depends crucially on their birthplace. If someone is born and grew up in the same place, they will be heavily influenced by the culture there. Therefore, it is easier for others to know where this person comes from due to the different accents and the costumes that they wear when they visit another part of the country. This unique characteristic was influenced by the historical background. This factor creates the difference of religion, custom between every part in the same nation. For example, in Vietnam, Saigon, which is the busiest and largest city in Vietnam, has some special tourist destination such as Independence Palace, Cu Chi tunnel, Notre Dame Cathedral,... because of the appearance of the Republic of Vietnam from 1954 to 1975, while Hanoi contains lots of well-known places for travelers, who want to go sightseeing, like Ho Chi Minh Mausoleum, Van Mieu, Old quarter street of 36 iconic streets,.. due to its long history with 1010 years.
On the other hand, as a result of the fourth technology industrial, it is really convenient for people to approach various cultures in the world. People can search for a huge amount of pictures and get more interesting information about some different lifestyles. For instance, in some countries like Vietnam, teenagers have been listening to Korean music for a long time ago, so they really admire the singers, who were contributed to their favorite songs. I think that globalization has lots of benefits for a person's culture. First, people have a good chance to work in their dream country for supporting their financial burden. In addition, it is vitally important for the younger generation to travel to lots of picturesque landscapes in the world. There is no doubt that the Covid- 19 pandemics have damaged the tourism industry since its terrible development, so the beginning of vaccine passport is crucial for the economy in every country.
To conclude, defining a person's culture by their origin is popular in every part of society. However, people should determine their nationality by lots of diverse aspects because of the small influence of birthplace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01005025126 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64669602972 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 398.0 20.2975951904 1961% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1994.0 106.682146367 1869% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 398.0 20.7667163134 1917% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 159.0 7.06120827912 2252% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243810360176 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.243810360176 0.084324248473 289% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168767347993 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525749430044 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 201.2 13.0946893788 1537% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -332.49 50.2224549098 -662% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 158.5 11.3001002004 1403% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.26 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.46 8.58950901804 320% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 161.2 10.1190380762 1593% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 159.0 10.7795591182 1475% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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