Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
In the era of globalization/ In modern society, the careers that have high level skills are tremendously required in a myriad of labor forces in many countries. This would cause a dispute whether professionals should be placed in the country where they spend most of their time training and studying. Although there are scores of people tending to approve this idea, I am of the opinion that their wish for working in other countries should be supported.
On the one hand, the option to support people who want to work in another country is appealing for several rationales. The most considerable justification is that they will represent for a nation’s act of protecting human’s rights. This could be explained by the fact that the country with the ideology of socialism which includes the protection of human rights in the content of the constitution is highly appreciated. As a result, if a country forbids their citizens to work abroad, this could be stated for that country’s weakness of legislation. Another justifiable explanation is that the numerous professionals spending time working in foreign countries will create a higher education’s quality for their country. This is because when working in a foreign environment, their skills and knowledge would be broadened. Therefore, when they return to their homeland, they will utilize what they have and transmit to their students if they wish.
On the other hand, there is an exposition asserting that people having high level skills jobs should stay in their country to devote their knowledge for the country's development. This is essential for every country in the world to have intelligentsia in the labor forces, especially when it comes to professionals such as doctors or engineers. For instance, according to recent research, a country with 70% of professionals predominantly will have a thriving economy.
In conclusion, while there are many benefits of disapproving professionals to working in another country, I still believe that it is more beneficial to appreciate the professionals for working abroad due to the plentiful merits that they could bring. It is advisable that people acknowledge all of the essential contributions to the country’s development along with their achievements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1924.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34444444444 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10947873842 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2985154272 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.266666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4164781683 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144377348412 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804241888063 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263438152045 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668464850251 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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