Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
It is often said that a large number of people all over the world are drawing attention to employment-related concerns.
While there are some people who strongly believe that skilled professionals ought be required to work where they are educated, others claim that they have the freedom to choose where they will pursue their career. Therefore, the following paragraphs will discuss the issue.
On the one hand, there are two primary points for people to defend that professionals should be forced to continue working in the country where they are trained. First of all, nowadays, many specialists studying abroad are required to work in order to fulfill their obligation to the government for the funding they received for their education. This is because the host country provides considerable funding for professional education, which creates an obligation for graduates to contribute to their country's development. In particular, Vietnamese students studying abroad on scholarships from the Australian host country are obliged to work in that nation at least 3 years.Furthermore, It is undeniable that professionals, such as doctors, may face language barriers when returning to their home country after a long time studying in another country such as difficulty translating medical terms from Hungarian to Vietnamese
On the other hand, there is a strong evidence for other people to support the fact that specialists should have freedom to choose a working destination. First and foremost, it is commonly accepted that having the freedom to choose where to work provides individuals with more opportunities to earn a higher income.
It is clear evidence that professionals often choose to work in developed countries where they can earn a higher salary than in their home country. Doctors in Vietnam have an average income of about $1000, whereas in Australia, their income can be up to five-fold higher
In conclusion, professionals have more chance to boost their income when they are freedom in work choosing, whereas it is my strong belief that they should dedicate their exceptional talent to create values for the the place where they are educated
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: many; numerous
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...to work in that nation at least 3 years.Furthermore, It is undeniable that professionals, s...
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...d foremost, it is commonly accepted that having the freedom to choose where to wo...
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Suggestion: the
...exceptional talent to create values for the the place where they are educated
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Suggestion: the; the
...exceptional talent to create values for the the place where they are educated
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...or the the place where they are educated
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, whereas, while, at least, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33819241983 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96388917699 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504373177843 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.357526186 49.4020404114 278% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.1 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.3 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41968936055 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166204311287 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117217874301 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202228956938 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109569512468 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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