Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The decision to work, whether for domestic companies or at a foreign nation, is a topic of concern these days. While I accept the benefit for professional workers of working where the training process took place, I am of the opinion that society should allow them to choose their career freely.
There are two reasons as to why I agree that joining the national workforce will be advantageous to the workers and also domestic industry. First, after years of studying and training, professionals will be able to contribute their abilities and labor to their country, by working in companies or departments of the state. This is even more important for the developing countries, for example, Viet Nam, which usually require a huge amount of well-educated employees to improve several realms. Second, the choice to enter the local workforce will ensure the future career path of new graduates with numerous job opportunities provided, and furthermore, enhance the life standard. This is because it may be easier for general individuals who are seeking jobs to approach national companies, rather than international ones, and since they are hired with stable wages and work environment,
However, it is better for workers, especially professionals, to follow their dream career without keeping them inside the national workforce. One main explanation is because, due to global integration these days, people have the right to move overseas as they wish without the control of neither government nor the public. Since educated employees gain jobs in another nation, usually in developed countries such as the US, Germany or Japan, they will be challenged by the requirements of foreign corporations and the peer pressure that may induce greater abilities in work. Furthermore, being employed and trained under international and professional agencies will develop the skills of workers, which may be difficult to accomplish in their home country. Personally, I support this point of view as better work experiences can lead to a lucrative income, which will be able to raise the life standard of employees. Trained workers are also able to help the domestic industry in several aspects.
In conclusion, although it is beneficial for employees to find a job in their own country, I believe the public should let the young generations follow their dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 887, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... with stable wages and work environment, However, it is better for workers, espec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1981.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26861702128 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88057207982 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.3735987439 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.384615385 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264973659114 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860283726766 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05404539772 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151907015014 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499959359789 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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