Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
A common debate is whether specialists trained domestically in vocations including medicine and engineering are obliged to take on employment in their homeland or should have the discretion to choose an overseas role. This essay will first elaborate on the merits of each assessment, before explaining why I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, in the opinion of advocates of professions there is a need to work where they are trained, there are also a number of reasons. The first is that higher education is often subsidized by taxpayers. The cost of educating students is very high, so if they don’t get government funding, only the rich can graduate, limiting opportunities for outstanding talent. Therefore, alumni have an obligation to give back to the society that has adopted them. Furthermore, these professionals may be more familiar with their country’s unwritten cultural norms, and thus can often achieve better results when communicating, interacting with citizens, or when meeting other people, remove others difficult situation.
On the other hand, like many others, I believe that professionals have an equal right to choose where they will work. Consider most importantly, they have spent years of their lives studying, neglecting relationships and mounting debt. That gives them the right to move abroad for a higher income or a better lifestyle, so it’s a worthy reward for that sacrifice. In addition, we can argue that all professionals can contribute to the economic growth of their country by earning a lot of foreign currency and sending it home, and at the same time they can also contribute to their country’s economic growth and glorify the country by participating in international discussions. It is these things that have made many people feel that studying and working abroad is very good.
In conclusion, I believe both sides have good reason. However, in my opinion, if a country provides all citizens with equal educational opportunities there is no reason to restrict anyone from freely making decisions about their workplace. Furthermore, I argue that professionals working abroad often make a significant contribution to their homeland through financial remittances. As a result, governments can focus on creating economic conditions that encourage in-demand professionals to seek employment locally.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40217391304 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07900460802 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589673913043 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.074468876 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275746214083 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752359035128 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575604821254 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146302008776 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656937351912 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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