some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while other think that TV is better for this purpose discuss both view give your opinion and relevant examples
it is undeniable fact that there are many ways to get the news about the events.Few individuals opinion that the radio is the perfect way to get news. while,other think that television is the most excellent way to get the news. In this as I will not only discuss both views but my opinion will also be highlighted while concluding this
to commence with, there are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. the prominent one is that radio is a superior way to receive the information about the World. radio is also easy carry device these days, radio feature have an all the electronic devices. such as phone and in cars .for instance, if a person is traveling and wants to know about the entertainment events and they can easily tune into radio and get all the interesting information.therefore, radio is one of the best way to get news and receive information.
On the other hand, no doubt television is also a good way to the entertainment. Because with the help of the TV we can see the picture as well as hear the audio. For example, in covid-19 situation everyone stuck at home and that time people are unable to go the outside and with the help of the television they were able to seen the current topic realted to the globe. Furthermore, television is not just limited to news but it is also one of the best form of entertainment at home.
In conclusion, although both radio and television are best way to receive the information about the things are occuring around the globe. However, television is a one step ahead of radio having video feature as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1290.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55830388693 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79859549558 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501766784452 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0788080072 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.9166666667 7.06120827912 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298342139727 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104817430137 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661052858113 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176614980063 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104019125513 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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