Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.
Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Crime is not favourable for the development of any society as well as acts as an impediment in the way of prosperity of any country. However, some concede that punishment for each crime should be fixed, while others point out that other factors should also be taken into account in deciding punishment. Now, I will put forth my views over this statement.
To begin with, predefined punishment for each crime is necessary in order to instill fear in criminals on account of plethora reasons. Firstly, it results in considerable saving of time and money, and thereby ensures smooth functioning of the judiciary. Furthermore, it brings a semblance of hope for the victims, as they get quick justice. On the top of that, enforcement of strict laws and punishments can help people to change their mindset, who do not take any law in a serious way and sometimes remain oblivious of the dire aftermath of crime. In addition, there are certain heinous crimes, which cross all the limitations of humanity such as anti-national activities, terrorism, assassination and so on, and here punishment must be as harsh as death, which can be plausible only with the fixed punishment.
However, it is also true that nowadays crime is quite prevalent among youngsters, which is partly an outcome of the lack of opportunities, frustration, improper milieu and many more, which allow the judiciary to cogitate and take all situations into consideration before deciding any punishment owing to some possible reasons. Firstly, many people have come under the influence of myriad negative things as a result their thinking ability has been choked and aptitude to differentiate between situations has been narrowed, which later make people to commit crime for their lofty goals, and hence in such situations, these factors should be scrutinized, because so many lives are associated with that person who is persecuted by punishment, thus there is an indirect impact on whole family. Notwithstanding, fixed punishment can utterly obliterate life of an individual because wealthy people can easily tamper facts and evidences, consequently an innocent person may suffer through the agony. For instance, it has been found that it is easier to tweak evidences, which form bedrock for any decision in judiciary.
In conclusion, I opine that main objective of the law and order is to protect the innocents and punish the wrong doers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1964.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19576719577 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90187885182 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597883597884 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.92002985 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.076923077 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0769230769 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7692307692 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344832600219 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10834194281 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102988021285 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194508246848 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107089668943 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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