Some people believe that sport has an important role in society. Others, however, feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A bit people think that amusement has an meaningful capacity in life. Others, however, feel that it is nothing extra than a freedom action for some people. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of sports has an important role in society. First, in every life for humans the most precious thing is health and wisdom. Need have good health will be make condition for wisdom and opposite. This health support, presumably tends not only prolonging life, but also helping people to participate in better collective activities, which eventually promotes a healthy society and useful people. Second, participate in sports activities would result in a greater healthy society of highly healthy labor, which benefits society in the long run. In fact, it is acknowledged that a person who is healthy and regularly practices sports is important to promote human resources for large companies and a person who diligently participates in sports activities will spread the benefits. It’s benefits to everyone, from which more people will know the importance of sports.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be much revolving around previous interests. First, too much exercise is synonymous with affecting some organs and digestive system in the body. When you too much exercise in too much hours, your digestive systems in your body will feel uncomfortable, your body feels exhausted after exercise or you don’t sleep well, these are signs you’re prone to. Second, the wrong way and excessive exercise make you feel boring and inability to concentrate highly in capacitated at work. It, instead sports bring many benefits and important to society when you do it right.
This essay above was discussed both views advantages and disadvantages of both views. In my opinion, sports is very important to society, not just a normal sport activity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
A bit people think that amusement has an meaningful capacity in life. Others, ho...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ecious thing is health and wisdom. Need have good health will be make condition for ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...body. When you too much exercise in too much hours, your digestive systems in your b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26451612903 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71041464625 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.690389335 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304127647714 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872283649014 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598151145031 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169467565147 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410944595893 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.