Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
When discussing about the successful future, there is an opinion that continue studying career in university or college can help them gain a high salary job. But others think it can not better than starting working forward after high school. In my point of view, both ways have they own advantages, but the first one is better than the second.
Firstly, study in higher level bring back many positive affects for the bachelors like they can be trained carefully by professional teacher from many aspects. So, they can know deeply the theories of their major subject and use it for future jobs. For example, a research from National Economics University showed that 80% of excellent student from that school achieved a good job with flying salary after graduated. The recuiretor of some famous international company like KPMG, EY, Deloitte, said they want a bachelor has been trained from A to Z because he/she has a thick background to make huge profit, even he/she just a newbie. And continue follow the learning career can provide some wonderful opportunities like broaden the cycle of relationship with intelligence people, get the access to enormous knowledgeable from schools ‘library, take the Introduction Letter from professors in order to study abroad.
Secondly, getting job straight also create positive chances for workers. They can start earning money to afford they hobbies and life, that is an evidence of the independent and becoming adults. The greatest benefit is they can gain meaningful experiences from reality and have strong backgrounds than students who lack of practical lessons at school. The famous example of that kind of people is Bill Gate. He left the university on the first year and began working afterward. The history proved that his choice was right when his product became familiar over the world and made him become the richest man at that time. His story is the inspiration for million youngsters to follow and set out a fact that “University is not the only way lead to succeed”.
So, both of this opinion have right side. But if I have to choose, I will consider studying in university because it is the safer choice and have more beneficial than others one.
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02989130435 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62354103618 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611413043478 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4663115935 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.882352941 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202388705068 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626463273625 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528776657684 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130636974496 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693593505791 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.