some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
discuss both views and give your own opinion
In these days and ages, it is often said that the best way to climb the career ladder is absorbing academic knowledge at institution school. Meanwhile, the opposite statement believed that getting a job immediately after high school is better. In my opinion, I will argue that it is more benefit to attend university or college.
The route to get a job straight after school is seem to be more attractive to learners. They can even start an independent life with their supplementary income from part-time or full-time job. In terms of occupation, those who stop studying career and attempt to find work can develop more quickly. They will have an opportunity to gain an actual experience in the field they interest. This will support and help learners achieve well performance in their career ladder.
On the other hand, I am be certain of students should continue their education path for many reasons. Firstly, some big enterprises usually require some qualifications or studies background especially in some particular professions. For example, if you want to become a doctor or a teacher, you have to overcome the academic syllabus and have the relevant degree. Therefore, university graduates not only approaching better chances, but also achieving higher salaries than those have fewer qualifications. Secondly, to whom may not know what they want to do, they can consider university degree as a back-up plan and this will help them access to better opportunity to make money before understanding their passionate field.
In conclusion, I believe that students are more likely to be successful in their careers path if they go on their studies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...e to get a job straight after school is seem to be more attractive to learners. They...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...hey will have an opportunity to gain an actual experience in the field they interest. This will s...
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Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...reer ladder. On the other hand, I am be certain of students should continue the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14814814815 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89258073692 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3312198015 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221329798616 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750274986608 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723549589506 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137919137631 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659795853743 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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