Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best
route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school. Discuss both views
While the majority assume that completing institutions ensure better job prospects, a group of people acts as an incentive for taking jobs immediately after high school due to the merits of experiences and money. To have a more elaborate insight, both of its will be listed.
On the one hand, It is irrefutable that bachelor's degree holders are attracting more career promises and better salaries. This is because of their expertise and knowledge assimilated from a pedagogical environment, including interpersonal and team-working skills, which is one of the vital employment criteria. Unless passing through take training courses in university, you are not allowed to work in particular fields. Take doctors for example, a specialized job requires at least a master's degree in college to get a legal license.
On the other hand, Working right after school can be beneficial to those who do not want to continue studying or perhaps are not able to study. To be specific, imcompetent students can take advantage of 4 year experiences and social skills when working for a small company which would never be taught by information deliverers in academic education. For instance, you are able to have a good grasp of how to adapt and adjust to the workforce and new environment.
To conclude, Both specialized techniques and working life experiences which can be gained by university and society, respectively, are valid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, at least, for example, for instance, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23144104803 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03520780397 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6031797137 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.8 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147583462039 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533818074423 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545032959081 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861037682272 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04231051354 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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