Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is to a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, number of people agree that learning at university or college is the main road to a successful. But other disagree and think that there is a lot of another job to be successful. The essay will describe two opposite opinions.
We can’t negate that there many people are successful because of learning university or college . In countries , children , teenager usually learn national education. The universities or colleges use study program to teach their student. Universities or colleges is place which help people have jobs after complete learning program. If you have study good, you will be chosen by companies. More fantastic CV , more salaries you have.
In others opinion, student should get a job before learning university. People may not be learn at university or college and they become professional PT , online sales , sport equipment sales, …. . They can get a lot of money from their jobs.
In my opinion, people should study university or college. However , If human have hobbies, they should do a work which relate to your hobbies after studying at school.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is to a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14772727273 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74042412514 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642045454545 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5047014473 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.7142857143 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5714285714 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24845429788 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877287545327 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660087129713 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15536904464 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033461564614 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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