Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
On the one hand, there are several good reasons why people tend to think that seeking a job straight after school is better. The primary reason is that young individuals can be financially independent since they can spend more time earning money than people who study at university or college. Students have to spend more time focusing on their studying, so they just get a part time job while you can get a full time job. A part time job definitely will earn less than a full time job. Therefore, they can purchase whatever they want such as a house, car and so on or share financial burden with their family. Another significance is that they can gain hands-on experience in real life since some particular jobs require practical skills more than theory such as designers, photographers, and artists. If they identified that they pursue these jobs, they would get a job to accumulate previous experience. Therefore, they can save enormous amounts of time to go to university and rapid career progression.
On the other hand, I am more in favor of the opinion that University or college education is the most direct path to a prosperous career. A clear benefit is that many jobs require professional knowledge since they demand great accuracy which can not be created by themselves. For instance, doctors who really know exactly how to treat disease / cure patients do not allow themselves to be creative. Therefore, university is an ideal environment to gain professional knowledge. Moreover, qualification will give you more job opportunities. The country starts to use technology, population increases, so the job market becomes more competitive, there are a lot of people applying for one position so that if you have a university degree, it can be a huge advantage compared to other applicants. Therefore, it can open the door to better career prospects for you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 375, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...g on their studying, so they just get a part time job while you can get a full time job. ...
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Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...get a part time job while you can get a full time job. A part time job definitely will ea...
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Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ob while you can get a full time job. A part time job definitely will earn less than a fu...
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Line 1, column 473, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...me job definitely will earn less than a full time job. Therefore, they can purchase whate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97763578275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8748772964 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584664536741 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0904071544 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.866666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190972536982 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068349763302 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498393065048 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145496193868 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166454029418 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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