Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowaday, there is a controversial issue that a lot of teenagers find it difficult to choose between getting a job after graduating or continuing their study at university or college. From my perspective, I believe that going to university or college is the best option because employers would prefer a person who has a huge amount of knowledge to work efficiently with less training time.
There are several reasons why the minors would prefer getting a job after school. First, this will help them gain experience due to the fact that having a career exposes them to a wider range of people. This is a great method to learn new practical skills entail teamwork, leadership, interpersonal skills,... Research suggests that engaging in a career gives young students an opportunity to try out different fields, deciding on which they fit perfectly. Therefore, the juvenile can be accustomed to searching for a job, knowing how to resume and enhancing interviewing skills. Take my sister’s friend as a case, she dropped out from school at 18 and moved to HCM city in search of a job, she enrolled herself as a staff of a café. After 2 years of trying, she has now become personnel manager of a brand owning many big released stores. Moreover, getting a job after school will assist them to save up money for college tuition.
On the other hand, employers in corporate international companies which offer high salaries require high academic qualifications for some professional jobs. This is due to the fact that many people expect to get what they pay for, a master's degree in resumé is considerably a justification of a high-paying career. A study has been undertaken in the UK in 2006 which has proved that employers would prefer postgraduates with academic diplomas rather than students with experiences of getting jobs after school.
For the above reasons, it seems to me that students with higher academic backgrounds are likely to be more successful in pursuing their dream jobs.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...amwork, leadership, interpersonal skills,... Research suggests that engaging in a ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...people expect to get what they pay for, a masters degree in resumé is considerably a just...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98198198198 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88592494653 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612612612613 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7567847409 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230272350447 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695079068649 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497957465987 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119314902031 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608013724096 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.