Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.
Discuss both views.
People have different views about whether students should go to university after graduating from school or not. Some people suppose that higher education is the best way to get career success whereas others argue that seeking a job straight after school is a better choice.
On the one hand, university graduates have many advantages in the job market. Firstly, people who complete third-level education have access to more and better job opportunities. Students are provided all-round education at universities or colleges and then, they could meet various requirements. As a result, those people become competitive among job seekers and have more job choices with a high salary. Moreover, in some fields of work, academic qualifications are essential to progress in their career. For instance, being a lecturer requires to have a bachelor's or master's degree. And it is deemed that where people could get such qualifications is solely universities.
On the other hand, people could benefit greatly from getting a job after leaving school. Instead of spending a prohibitive cost of tertiary education, people could start making money early. Therefore, it is assumed that those people would ensure their basic living standards and back up parents to raise their families as well. And, having a stable income will encourage people to start their own family or settle down at a young age. Furthermore, entering the job market at an early stage could make people more mature. They would have opportunities of fostering social skills and gaining practical experiences of the work. Therefore, they could have a great practical outlook on life and world in comparison with others who allocate time to studying academic disciplines.
In conclusion, both learning at universities and getting a job after graduating from high school have its positive side.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...ance, being a lecturer requires to have a bachelors or masters degree. And it is deemed tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34812286689 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80829930387 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590443686007 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8682097529 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2352941176 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88235294118 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307444209311 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987475420463 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910303158107 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22271660767 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904125746973 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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