Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Upon graduating from high school, the young often face a dilemma of whether to keep on studying further or seek a job. Although there may be some benefits of getting a job straight after school, I would argue that pursuing higher education will be a better way to guarantee a successful career.
The option of working straight after graduation is attractive for some reasons. Firstly, by getting a job, young people will be able to earn a living as soon as possible. As a matter of fact, being affordable to buy their own house or become financially independent when making the decision can give the youngsters sense of fulfillment. Secondly, high school leavers who choose to get a job instead of pursuing academic studies may stand a chance of progressing more rapidly in their career. Because they can obtain practical skills and real experience related to the chosen profession.
On the other hand, it seems to me that continuing further studies is more beneficial for students. First, a college education prepares youngsters to meet high-level qualifications, which is expected by many employers these days. University graduates usually get a much higher salary than those without a university education. Furthermore, the job market is becoming increasingly competitive, as hundreds of applicants often chase the top jobs. Earning a university degree is an obvious advantage that young graduates have and enhance their competence. In Vietnam, students who graduate with an engineering degree are highly paid and have an easy time getting a good job.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that students are more likely to be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond school level
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Suggestion:
...have an easy time getting a good job. For the reasons mentioned above, I belie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, as a matter of fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19784172662 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86905401454 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4452969115 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245193764801 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751939713831 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555871719853 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152003437493 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396903364322 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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