Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Going to the extras miles is the key answer to achieve the success for several community. I acknowledge this statement because there is no lazy person who will be the successful man, but, everyone has to also pray because there is invisible hand intervening every single people activity.
Unquestionably, every individual who gain the glorious in every field -business, government, private sector, etc- is the professional, credible, and reputable person. Due to that fact, in order to have successful characteristics, everybody has to begin from the hard work. The state-of-the-art worldwide knows Bill Gates as a businessman or philanthropist, Nelson Mandela as a leader, and Cristiano Ronaldo as an athlete who get their victory started from the diligent and always struggle in every condition and situation for a long time. They also learn from their mistakes and trying to solve every problem and never do they stop it until their duties or occupations are really over. They are very busy and only have a short time to sleep, so, no wonder if they are becoming the role model in the world.
However, praying is not be left behind in every single activity, particularly for people who believe the God, because He listens and understands what humankind want to be. Besides, praying is the warning to people in order to always on the track and when they gain the top position, they always will be grateful and never will they be an arrogant character. Even though being the richest man, Bill Gates always cares for poverty, environment, and education as well as Cristiano Ronaldo, one of the best football player, has been paying the humanity attention. Their attitude is the form of gratitude.
In conclusion, hard work and praying are the success key answer.
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- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 78
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- Some people believe that success comes from hard work. Do you agree with and why? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...becoming the role model in the world. However, praying is not be left behind i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04081632653 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8066975292 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965669755253 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441458129919 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527800014933 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789983637775 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436922665952 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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