Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The bitter controversy centered on whether calling for youngsters to do voluntary works for society in leisure time or not. While some people advocate that teenagers should merely focus on their study, my view is that participation the social activities of young generation would be an indispensable part of contributing to their potential benefits in the sustainable development society.
There is no doubt that taking part in community activities of students aged 13-19 can bring numerous plus points about knowledge and skills. It is profoundly true to say that every communal endeavor can partly contribute to laying for the youngsters a firm foundation of essential competences to step out of parent’s arms. The majority of adults in modern civilized society, actually, constantly complain that the young neither own basic skills nor can apply their academic study to practice. And it is in the social works that juveniles could gain the so-called soft, problem-solving and communication skills, which in return invaluable assets for them in the long run.
Moreover, undertaking the civic projects, to some extent, could create not merely the mental health but also the well-being for themselves and for community. In fact, since every single person is a vital cell of society and it can be concretely considered its irreplaceable role in constructing and evolving the robust country, the successful development of community is the same as the enormous achievement of the young adults. Therefore, youngsters will feel good about being involved in something which they feel helpful and valued, and where they’re supported to achieve something as part of a group. These positive feelings can help protect young people from sadness and depression.
In conclusion, I assume that participating in the community activities in leisure time would be a rewarding experience for teenagers in order to enhance necessary skills and improve psychological wellness after hard studying. However, it will be better for students if they can balance between studying and doing volunteer.
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- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43209876543 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99599641406 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5921078125 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231041023733 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763154780963 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481279234779 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145391252762 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562259076228 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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