Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time This can benefit teenagers and the community as well To what extent do you agree or disagree.
The importance of volunteer work which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people Claiming that it is beneficial while other reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential work in recent years.In my opinion the former proportion appears to be more rational.This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that unpaid work is crucial for new generation as it can help to reduce the hesitation which they feel by talking with new people like if people want to do help so they need to talk with others who has a need and it can improve their communication skills. Categorically discussing it can not be ignored that the main reason behind this is that it is also very good for society because they can help elder people by doing their works and drop them they need to go somewhere that’s why people should definitely do unpaid work. For example, during the pandemic doctors as well as police men had a lot of pressure by government to handle the public and stop them for going to public places as well give the treatment if they have any problem so it was difficult situation for government employees to handle the public alone so they get help from volunteers to do this work.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact is that in the modern era there are very hard competition in the study so youngsters need a hard work to clear their education but if they will spending time on unpaid work then how can they focus on their studies which is also necessary for them.Moreover, volunteers also have goals for their future but if they will spending time on unpaid works then they can distract from their aim which is not good thing like as if someone has goal but they cannot achieved it because they did not do enough hard work to achieve their goal that’s they can loose their aim and got psychological disorder that’s why it is very important to focus on your aims.Apart from the reasons mentioned above it can be clearly stated why many are against of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of unpaid work are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 424.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75471698113 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59183412463 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 20.2975951904 345% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 208.810121083 49.4020404114 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.0 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.6666666667 20.7667163134 340% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 7.06120827912 262% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2216179491 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129252100007 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602609555676 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130631649361 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047330383511 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.3 13.0946893788 277% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 8.89 50.2224549098 18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.0 10.1190380762 296% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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