Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued that teenagers ought to focus on all school curriculum. While others opined that teenagers should concentrate on the subjects in which they show most interest or performed well. This essay agrees that teenager should focus on subject of their interest. This essay will discuss the both viewpoints; followed by reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, many people who are in favor of all subjects should be focused by teenagers say that passing mark of any class constitute on all subjects rather than on single subject. For example, passing marks of 5th grade class is 55%, a student cannot pass the class just taking 55% in one subject and failed in others. The total result will take all subjects in to account. Moreover, if teenager will focus on all subjects it will give overall perspective of all fields ranging from sciences to economics. For example, a teenager who have knowledge of all subjects, he can apply it daily life and help around people on daily basis
On the other hand, some people believe that if a teenager focused only the subjects that they are good at or those appealed them, they will be able to be more focused towards their future goals. For example, if a teenager is brilliant in chemistry, he will able to pursue his careers to be a scientist and do wonders rather he become economist. Moreover, by focusing on subjects on which teenager feel confident will enrich him with confidence and self-achievement. For example, report published by a reputed newspaper that teenager who focused on their interested subjects will achieve more in life as compared to other teens.
In conclusion, while the benefits of to focus on all subject cannot be overlooked, however, not at the cost of teenager’s future prospect by focusing on the subjects of their interest.
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- Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91475409836 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65268798785 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501639344262 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2048004766 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.307692308 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464471633749 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181902389626 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104900237862 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300781631921 0.151304729494 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775733742058 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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