Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued that teenagers ought to focus on all school curriculum. While others opined that teenagers should concentrate on the subjects in which they show more interest or performed well. In my opinion, teenager should focus on subject of their interest. This essay will discuss the both viewpoints; followed by reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, many people who are supportive of the claim that all subjects should be focused by teenagers say that passing mark of any class constitute on all subjects rather than on a single subject. For example, passing marks of 5th grade class is 55%, a student cannot pass the class just taking 55% in just a subject and failed in others. The total result will take all subjects into account. Moreover, if teenager will focus on all subjects it will give an overall perspective of all fields ranging from sciences to economics. For illustration, a teenager who has knowledge of all subjects, he can apply it in daily life.
On the other hand, some people believe that if a teenager focused only on the subjects that they are good at or those appealed them, they will be able to be more focused towards their future goals. For instance, if a teenager is brilliant in chemistry, he will able to pursue his careers to be a scientist and do wonders rather he becomes something he don’t want to. Furthermore, by focusing on all the subjects on which teenager feels confident will enrich him with confidence and self-achievement.
In conclusion, while the benefits of to focus on all subject cannot be overlooked, however, not at the cost of teenager’s future prospect by focusing on subject of their interest.
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- Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- Some People believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they the most interest Discuss both sides and give your opinion 67
- Compare the line graph 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[2]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'doesn’t'.
Suggestion: doesn’t
... wonders rather he becomes something he don’t want to. Furthermore, by focusing on al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89679715302 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75456793951 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4941273188 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.846153846 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470290831707 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181158796166 0.084324248473 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115364757537 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303550367543 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914399967061 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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