Some people believe that teenager should concentrate on all school subjects but others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education is consider as a third eye of human beings. Majority of people claim that all subjects should compulsory for students whereas other individuals says that they should choose only that subjects in which they show their interest as well as best for them . I will discuss my point of views in upcoming paragraphs .
To commence with, there are some reasons behind it that why people says that all subjects are compulsory for teenagers . To elaborate, in school times, younglings have not enough knowledge about anything because they cannot think that which subject is best for them . They are not able to choose anything . All subjects are very important for them because after tenth standard they can easily choose any stream if they will read all subjects then they will not have any problem in their study and they can easily know anything of any stream. If they will focus on one subject then in future they will face some difficulties . As a result, all subjects should be compulsory for students because all are very beneficial as well as helpful for students.
On the other hand, there are numerous reasons behind it. First and foremost point is that pupils should choose only that subjects which they want to learn because some tutors have interest in one subject . They can easily concentrate on that subject which is choose by them because in that subject they can achieve good marks which are very beneficial for them for their further to study. Secondly, learners can save their time because they will read only that in which they can show their interest. As a result, they should learn only that subject which is better for them.
In conclusion, although, there are lot of reasons that why teenagers should learn all subjects but we cannot neglect the students interest. Hence they should learn that subject which is choose by their own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
Education is consider as a third eye of human beings. Majorit...
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Suggestion: .
... their interest as well as best for them . I will discuss my point of views in upc...
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...my point of views in upcoming paragraphs . To commence with, there are some rea...
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...ll subjects are compulsory for teenagers . To elaborate, in school times, younglin...
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...hink that which subject is best for them . They are not able to choose anything . ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can easily know anything of any stream. If they will focus on one subject then in ...
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... future they will face some difficulties . As a result, all subjects should be com...
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...some tutors have interest in one subject . They can easily concentrate on that sub...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ly concentrate on that subject which is choose by them because in that subject they ca...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e cannot neglect the students interest. Hence they should learn that subject which is...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...they should learn that subject which is choose by their own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88291139241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2834407249 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411392405063 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8879106226 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31049986691 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128981733068 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725783418543 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237696248921 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304890012635 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
Education is consider as a third eye of human beings. Majorit...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... their interest as well as best for them . I will discuss my point of views in upc...
^^
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...my point of views in upcoming paragraphs . To commence with, there are some rea...
^^
Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ll subjects are compulsory for teenagers . To elaborate, in school times, younglin...
^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hink that which subject is best for them . They are not able to choose anything . ...
^^
Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...m . They are not able to choose anything . All subjects are very important for the...
^^
Line 3, column 543, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can easily know anything of any stream. If they will focus on one subject then in ...
^^
Line 3, column 624, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... future they will face some difficulties . As a result, all subjects should be com...
^^
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...some tutors have interest in one subject . They can easily concentrate on that sub...
^^
Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...ly concentrate on that subject which is choose by them because in that subject they ca...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 142, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e cannot neglect the students interest. Hence they should learn that subject which is...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'chosen'.
Suggestion: chosen
...they should learn that subject which is choose by their own.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, well, whereas, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88291139241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2834407249 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.411392405063 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8879106226 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31049986691 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128981733068 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725783418543 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237696248921 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304890012635 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.