Some people believe that there are more advantages to learning foreign languages at primary school age than secondary school level.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion?
In some countries, foreign languages have been taught to the children in early age while the others do not approach new languages until secondary school. Nevertheless, learning formal languages in primary school can brings some enormous advantages.
Students who are at secondary school age have faster brain and firmer first language basic to study new languages more effectively than the smaller ages. Moreover, secondary students can learn some advance skills such as grammar rules and writing essays. However, they may get self-unconfident to speak or be afraid to make mistakes. In addition, as a consequence of exam pressure, the language becomes a “school subject” which forces students to study hard rather than a real language. Thus they may lose their passion on that language.
Contrary to them, primary students approach and learn foreign language very quickly. They confidently speak all the things they know and do not hesitate of making mistakes. Moreover, there is no time pressure or examinations to make their study to be compulsive. Notwithstanding, the younger children could forget a new language as easily as they learn it if they do not have opportunities to practice regularly. Children can also confuse the words that have similar pronunciations or the meaning for example. Therefore, they may reject to study the language they do not understand.
In conclusion, it is much better to start studying a foreign language at primary school age and continued improve the knowledge by practicing and higher study in high school age. It is likely to lead to successful communication in new language.
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Suggestion: bring
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232638888889 0.247107183377 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.155533422707 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114583333333 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0729166666667 0.0501214627716 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0486111111111 0.0437548338989 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0763888888889 0.122226691241 62% => OK
Participles: 0.0347222222222 0.0403226058552 86% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95323260856 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0451388888889 0.0326793684256 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0694444444444 0.0861772015684 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243055555556 0.021408717616 114% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1642.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 260.0 316.048096192 82% => OK
Chars per words: 6.31538461538 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.407692307692 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.319230769231 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246153846154 0.203846283523 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95323260856 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 56.9591021695 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5753209254 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.625 127.492653851 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.1730769231 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.19277108434 1.69124875643 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282815983131 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0721921380171 0.102741220458 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0683961143888 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.51628929227 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177917517465 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103968491794 0.134430193775 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748632656327 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276346476883 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0913543882475 0.0638462369009 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204874690388 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569665448654 0.058150111329 98% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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