Creative artists should always be given freedom to express their own ideas (in words, picture, music, film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
For over centuries, art has been playing the main role in people’s mental lives. Creative persons of art are respected in many countries, since they can attract people with their talent and result of their artistic works. To make a well-qualified product, the work environmental is a vital factor to the artists. Therefore, many people think that artists should always be given the freedom to work effectively. However, if there are no restrictions on them, some serious problems can be emerged.
Work environment can inspired the artists some wonderful ideas on the products which is the essential basic to make a well-qualified art piece. Imposing restriction on creative minds is an act that can only kill the potential of a great work. On the other hand, an art masterpiece is seen to have the artist’s soul and mind. In freedom, there is no pressure or distraction thus the artist can work freely to express their own creation without and any constraint.
Nevertheless, some law should be obeyed to maintain social order and stability. Without any restriction, some harmful products could spread out widely and harm people’s mind whereas hurt their belief. For instance, a large proportion of offenders, especially the juveniles, have been affected badly by some violent and corruptible products. Thanks to government restriction, these depraved products and banned and eliminated significantly to the social livelihood.
In conclusion, even though freedom is an indispensible factor for artists’ inspiration, there should be some practical laws to get rid of the depraved products.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248251748252 0.247107183377 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.146853146853 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104895104895 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0384615384615 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.020979020979 0.0437548338989 48% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0909090909091 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.048951048951 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03079294433 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034965034965 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0034965034965 0.00163938923432 213% => OK
Determiners: 0.115384615385 0.0861772015684 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0314685314685 0.021408717616 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00699300699301 0.011925033212 59% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1611.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 316.048096192 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34251968504 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397637795276 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299212598425 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.240157480315 0.203846283523 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161417322835 0.137316102897 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03079294433 2.80594681477 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.037074148 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610236220472 0.56093040696 109% => OK
Word variations: 64.8096323122 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9333333333 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1697233731 49.517814964 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 127.492653851 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.814263465372 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.8545931759 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.8813559322 1.69124875643 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224044525897 0.332605444948 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0945761249195 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0588337140579 0.0668466124924 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.541828696638 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.156630411331 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912372226167 0.134430193775 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618089762589 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277803176984 0.324371583561 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0941658210094 0.0638462369009 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154983465235 0.228012699653 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563293563527 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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