Nowadays, crime rates have been raising. While some people believe that punishments should be decided according to the circumstances, others argue that there should be fixed punishments for all crimes. Although fixed retributions might be beneficial for some types of crimes, I believe that there should be exceptions according to the situations.
Some people believe that applying fixed penalties for all kind of crimes is a must. They might think that if there is an evident punishment for a crime then criminals will be frightened from it, therefore, they would not commit it. However, this claim can be contradict by the facf that there are crimes with fixed retribution but they are still committed. For example, the death penalty for murdering has not stop those criminals from killing people even though it is obvious that their fate, with no doubt, will be death.
On the other hand, others believe that rimes Like robbery asa result of poverty there are some factors should be considered. Circumstances and motivations play a crucial role in some crimes like burglary and robbery. These type of crimes might be committed as a result of poverty or in some cases teenagers to emulate a character in a movie or sometimes just to fulfill their curiosity. Therefore, one’s should not be punished without taking into account the conditions that forced them. For example, how can they compared one had to stole some goods to give it to his poor family with one just stole them for fun? That is completely unfair. I strongly believe that the motive behind a crime should be always taken into consideration.
In conclusion, crimes’ penalties have been a controversial topic. In my opinion, I support the concept that circumstances and motivations should be considered as many people commit some crimes like robbery as a result of their poor conditions.
- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 67
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The graph below shows average carbon dioxide co2 emissions per person in the United kingdom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language 67
- Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake regardless of whether the course 82
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07817589577 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74160307882 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4984199158 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4375 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.584577792677 0.244688304435 239% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190151682895 0.084324248473 226% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124177545521 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.362118840164 0.151304729494 239% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10188493641 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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