Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for commiting it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishmentş
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Since the creation of human beings crimes have become one of the diseases of societies. As crimes are committed regularly, punishment comes to the first place in order to punish criminals which aims to isolate them from the society and in this way to eliminate crimes. But how to punish criminals? Is a fixed punishment a best way of the motives and the circumstances of the crime should be taken into account while punishing them? In this essay I will compare both types of punishments.
First of all we have to acknowledge that, no one can ever make sure that he or she will not commit a crime in...
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Is a fixed punishment a best way of the motives and the circumstances of the crime should be taken into account while punishing them?
Is a fixed punishment the best way of the motives or the circumstances of the crime should be taken into account while punishing them?
a robber enters the house in the middle of the night, does not manage to steal anything and while leaving the house tries the infant of the family with him as a hostage in an attempt to claim money from his parents.
a robber enters the house in the middle of the night. He does not manage to steal anything and while leaving the house, he tries the infant of the family with him as a hostage in an attempt to claim money from his parents.
Sentence: Is a fixed punishment a best way of the motives and the circumstances of the crime should be taken into account while punishing them?
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: Without considering the circumstances of the crime a driver can be punished with the same level of punishment of other naturally criminals.
Description: The fragment other naturally criminals is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace naturally with adjective
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