Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It is recommended that higher education institutes should take an admission on the same amount of both gender pupils in all programs. Although, I agree with this statement boys and girls students have equal rights to study in every subject, female students are improve their skills.
According to me, when male and female students who have studied at universities, institutes should select the similar number of both gender students. Because both sex students can equal abilities and give a chance to choose their desire course. As they would be connected with each others and give the respect, so they can learn human values and give respect to people in the glob. As a result, both sex students are without afraid working with male and female staff in the future. Also, it can be shared their skills with each other.
Moreover, It is beneficial for women students who have most intelligence and able to study on a different kind of subject. they can be rising their abilities on particular subject, and it would useful for the community and for themselves. Subsequently, women are more independent and achieve their goal whatever they want in their life. For example, a recent study found that girls students are increased at the university of London because the university accepted both gender students on the same proportion in every program.
In conclusion, it is suggested that universities should give similar chance to men and women students about study in several curriculum; however, I believed that both sex students has equal authorities to study and women would get experience and increased their knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 262, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...y in every subject, female students are improve their skills. According to me, whe...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...students are improve their skills. According to me, when male and female students who have...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...o study on a different kind of subject. they can be rising their abilities on partic...
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Line 13, column 118, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun curriculum seems to be countable; consider using: 'several curricula', 'several curriculums'.
Suggestion: several curricula; several curriculums
...o men and women students about study in several curriculum; however, I believed that both sex stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15037593985 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64729998011 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515037593985 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1645767614 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21900256809 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844467522296 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739976064017 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14291293342 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319125931301 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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